First, I went to my teacher Sally and then my teacher Sally drew a chart on the board so we can keep on task.i learned video game challenge can be done sometimes i can't be done
doing the things i make and play and hard thing was making the story was hard i thort the story in my green book please do a cind regard sam
Kia Ora Sam,
ReplyDeleteWell done on completing this writing. I can see after our talk you went back and revised the sentences so that they all made sense. I am very proud of doing this without my support. You have made excellent improvements this year in your writing and I am so proud of you!
Perhaps in your next post you could move the writing around the picture so it's easier to read.