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story i learned my family and there jobs
and my great great grandpas and grandma wall it was easy to write the story in the chrome book but it was hard to wrote write the story I wrote this story i my google drive on google docs please live a kind comment on my blog
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Kia Ora Sam,
ReplyDeleteGood job on describing yourself. I like how you started with "one day a whanau had a son", it was a unique way of starting your self-description. Don't forget about full stops and capital letters— they can help you when you write, and they can really help the reader understand what it is you're trying to get across.
Keep up the good work Sam!